Monday, October 21, 2013

Poem #2

I  have been struggling with creating the poems.   For me writing a poem has to be more immediate.  I have found that if I journal, the idea disapears once it is in writing.  I'm hoping to go back to finish the thoughts.  I'm hoping they become clearer with my experience both in life and as a poet.
I decided to give this a quick try with out brainstorming.   Let me know if you can figure out what I'm talking about.



The air is crisp
The color has changed
Tinder is afoot
Phosphorus across the board
Chemical change occurs
Oxygen supplied
It breaths, it eats, it lives!
The hunt begins
Searching, stalking… discovery
Confectionery delight
Culinary imperfection
Heat application
Caramelization, ignition
Extinguish to perfection

What do you think? 

Friday, October 18, 2013

Senior Skip day brainstorming



I’ve noticed recently that students at my high school are getting pretty comfortable.  


A few seniors bragged to me that they skipped and that they felt like they were entitled to it because they have been working for the last 12 years and they deserve some days off.


So I am thinking about writing new poem about Senior Skip day; so here is my brainstorming.

I worked in industry for 20 years, and was allowed to only 2 weeks of vacation a year.  One week of sick leave.

I designed anti-terrorist security barriers.   My tests cost $50,000.00.  My math better be right or it will cost another $50,000.00 if I don’t lose my job.  Lose my job and I lose credibility in the industry and won’t find another job like it.

So take your day off.

I'll work on more of this later

Friday, September 27, 2013

The King: It's the new idea.



I have found that I have been struggling with ideas about what to write another poem about.  I kind of stumbled in to the idea of writing about my mentor.  I have also been thinking of righting about viewing the ISS with the naked eye. Those thoughts have been running through my mind.  I also have been thinking about other passion I have.  I love racing.  I think that I might be able to write disguise a poem about racing as something else.  I have been reflecting back on my childhood.  I’ve been thinking about this idea of “painting a picture.”

When I was 6 years old, we were at Daytona for the July race.  I can distinctly remember leaning against the fence in the tri-oval at the racetrack.  I was looking toward turn 4 and Richard Petty came cruising around the corner at nearly 200 mph.  The car drifted up toward the wall.  He drove about 6 inches off of the wall when he raced.  His philosophy was that if you were closer to the wall when you lost control, it would hurt less than if you traveled farther to hit the wall.  Anyway, I vividly remember the silver grill of the Dodge Charger coming right toward me.  Because of the slight curve in the track he was literally lined up on me. 200 mph is FAST!  The squares in the fence were about 6 inches square.  I found fit my 6 year old face through the fence.  When he zipped passed me I could have reached out and touched the car.   The suction the car created tugged my tiny little frame tighter up against the fence (Bernoulli).  I also experienced the Doppler affect as the motor grew louder and louder as he quickly approached, and went screaming by only to have the sound soften as he drove away.

Petty Blue, Blaze Orange, Red Stripes.  STP, #43



The man had 200 victories, 7 championships and 7 Daytona 500 victories.   They don’t call him The King for nothing.

As much as I respect what he did, and that cherish that moment, he wasn’t my favorite race car driver.  He was one of them, but not the one I liked Best.  I liked this cat named Buddy Baker.  Baker won only 19 races and one Daytona 500.  He never won a championship.  But when he raced a car, he ran it as fast as it would go every single lap.  HE was hard on motors because he pushed them so hard.  He would lead 75% of a race, only to have the motor break.  I loved everything about this guy.

So anyway, I’ve been toying with this idea of just painting the picture of the Petty Memory.  But I also have been thinking of righting the poem from the point of view of Buddy Baker; forever trying to dethrone The King.   I also started thinking of Petty being The King and the Lion being the king of beast.  Engines roaring, Lions Roaring.  Petty’s crew was made up of mostly family members.  They did all the foot work behind the scenes.  He capitalized on their work; much like the male lion doesn’t do the hunting, he relies on his pride to do all of the hunting.

The trick is to figure out if Buddy Baker is another lion, or is he more like a cheetah.

Saturday, September 21, 2013

Traditional Engineering Design Process



Traditional Engineering Design Process

There are two basic methods to engineering design, yet every company has its own model that it follows.  The two basic approaches are the traditional engineering design and concurrent engineering design.  The traditional engineering design process uses a linear approach. The concurrent approach is more web-like, but is still based on the linear approach.  There are 8 steps to the traditional approach.

Step 1:  State the Problem
This is the step where the basic design idea is conceived.  This is the step where the brainstorming takes place.  This is also the step where you would collaborate with team members and also perform research.
Step 2:  Analyze the Need
I believe this step is self-explanatory.  The engineer must decide if the product is practical and marketable.
Step 3:  Set the Objectives
In engineering this is the step were we would first set the general objectives and then specific objectives.  We would write a proposal explaining what the problem to be solved is that would include the design concept specifications and estimated costs.
Step 4:  Create Alternatives
In this step we would consider the physical design of the product.  You must consider all of the criteria required and what your constraining factors are.  If I were creating a design on a CAD system I would create several different models.
Step 5:  Check for Feasibility
Now is the time to study each of the design concepts carefully and select the design that best meets the objectives that were set as well as which design is the most marketable.  There is a loop in that begins in this step that goes back to Step 4 to optimize the design.
Step 6:  Select a solution/ develop a prototype
The most feasible solution is selected and then a prototype is constructed.  This is the part where you would test the design and make sure it meets the specifications.
Step 7:  Feedback/Market Response
The prototype is submitted and analyzed by a specific market research group. Your research group needs to be unbiased to get the best possible feedback.  If you find that changes are required the process reverts back to Step 4 and continues forward from there again.
  Draw the design

This is where the final drawings are prepared as well as specifications and other documentation.  The product is then turned over to marketing and manufacturing. And you move on to the next design problem.

I always liked the linear approach because it is simple and my drafting teaching in high school always told us to, “KISS IT: Keep It Simple, Stupid.”  That guy was awesome. That’s a different story, or maybe a different poem.

So as an engineer I am going to attempt poetry using this process because this is what I know.

Friday, September 20, 2013

"Welcome to Tomorrow" and some other ramblings



There are a few interesting points that I have noticed so far on my short little journey into the world of poetry.

  1. I find myself look at things a little differently again.  Basically, I am looking for some inspiration.
  2. I find myself having a different attitude towards poetry than I did when I was in high school.
  3. I find that this blog might be the best place to document ideas.  For example, Wednesday, I had the idea that I wanted to get on paper.  I didn’t bring my note book with me to write stuff down, and to be honest, I’m not the kind of guy who is going to carry a poetry notebook around with me anyway even if it does look like this:




I have also made the decision to go ahead and post the first poem up, but you have to know that it is still a work in progress.
Here goes:

Welcome to tomorrow
What is new is old
what’s old, is new
She is gone
To be with her own kind

We are forced
to pick up the slate
Forced to move on
Like it or not
It’s not our choice
But the choice is made
Welcome to tomorrow

Right now the part I don’t like is the part marked in yellow.   It has been suggested that I should try to paint a better picture.  This is actually pretty hard for me.  So I wrote down some of my brainstorming ideas that I might try to use.

  • To many bees in the honey
  • Golden honey
  • Honey is golden
  • Honey tastes sweet
  • Honey is sticky
  • Flies in the honey trap
  • You catch more flies with honey than you do vinegar
  • Vinegar is interesting….
  • It’s bitter
  • Vinegar is an acid.
  • Honey and vinegar.