Poem #2

I  have been struggling with creating the poems.   For me writing a poem has to be more immediate.  I have found that if I journal, the idea disapears once it is in writing.  I'm hoping to go back to finish the thoughts.  I'm hoping they become clearer with my experience both in life and as a poet.
I decided to give this a quick try with out brainstorming.   Let me know if you can figure out what I'm talking about.

The air is crisp

The color has changed

Tinder is afoot

Phosphorus across the board

Chemical change occurs

Oxygen supplied

It breaths, it eats, it lives!

The hunt begins

Searching, stalking… discovery

Confectionery delight

Culinary imperfection

Heat application

Caramelization, ignition

Extinguish to perfection

What do you think?