I have found that I have been struggling with ideas about
what to write another poem about. I kind
of stumbled in to the idea of writing about my mentor. I have also been thinking of righting about viewing the ISS with the naked eye. Those thoughts have been running through my
mind. I also have been thinking about
other passion I have. I love racing. I think that I might be able to write
disguise a poem about racing as something else.
I have been reflecting back on my childhood. I’ve been thinking about this idea of “painting
a picture.”
When I was 6 years old, we were at Daytona for the July
race. I can distinctly remember leaning against
the fence in the tri-oval at the racetrack.
I was looking toward turn 4 and Richard Petty came cruising around the
corner at nearly 200 mph. The car
drifted up toward the wall. He drove
about 6 inches off of the wall when he raced.
His philosophy was that if you were closer to the wall when you lost
control, it would hurt less than if you traveled farther to hit the wall. Anyway, I vividly remember the silver grill
of the Dodge Charger coming right toward me.
Because of the slight curve in the track he was literally lined up on
me. 200 mph is FAST! The squares in the
fence were about 6 inches square. I
found fit my 6 year old face through the fence.
When he zipped passed me I could have reached out and touched the
car. The suction the car created tugged
my tiny little frame tighter up against the fence (Bernoulli). I also experienced the Doppler affect as the
motor grew louder and louder as he quickly approached, and went screaming by
only to have the sound soften as he drove away.
Petty Blue, Blaze Orange, Red Stripes. STP, #43
The man had 200 victories, 7 championships and 7 Daytona 500
victories. They don’t call him The King for nothing.
As much as I respect what he did, and that cherish that
moment, he wasn’t my favorite race car driver.
He was one of them, but not the one I liked Best. I liked this cat named Buddy Baker. Baker won only 19 races and one Daytona
500. He never won a championship. But when he raced a car, he ran it as fast as
it would go every single lap. HE was
hard on motors because he pushed them so hard.
He would lead 75% of a race, only to have the motor break. I loved everything about this guy.
So anyway, I’ve been toying with this idea of just painting
the picture of the Petty Memory. But I
also have been thinking of righting the poem from the point of view of Buddy
Baker; forever trying to dethrone The
King. I also started thinking of
Petty being The King and the Lion
being the king of beast. Engines
roaring, Lions Roaring. Petty’s crew was
made up of mostly family members. They
did all the foot work behind the scenes.
He capitalized on their work; much like the male lion doesn’t do the
hunting, he relies on his pride to do all of the hunting.
The trick is to figure out if Buddy Baker is another lion,
or is he more like a cheetah.

I really liked the ideas for this poem. I'm just going to give you some descriptive words that I come up with when I try to paint the picture that I think you are going for:
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Powerful, Pride, *Predatory(<--- Thought this one would be a good adjective for the attempt of dethroning Petty)
Fast, Furry, Furious, Feline, Mufasa, Scar,
Mission to dethrone:
Covert
NASCAR:
Chute, Push, Loose, Free, Oldsmobile, Legend, Agility, Acceloration, Expedition, Breeze, Fleetness, Gate, Haste, Rapid, Pace, Stamina, Dyno
On Being less succesful thanPetty:
Nether, peon, subsidiary, subordinate, junior, obscurity, Inferior, superior
You follow racing at all?
ReplyDeleteIt's weird about the racing. Of all of the passions that I have, Racing trumps them all.
i think writing about racing is a really good idea for you. its virtually impossible to write anything good about something you don't care about (trust me, they make us do it all the time in school). i know that whenever there comes a time i get to do some free style writing, such as for college essays, i always have to first think about what i am passionate about. i think about what gives me the most joy in life. usually the first things that come up are karate and running. these things seem so impossible to right about because they are not really very english-y/inspirational. because they are things i care so much about, and give me so much joy in my life, i can go on for days about either topic. during that, something good is bound to fight its way onto my paper. if not, i just keep on writing until it does. to come full circle back to your writing, i think that it is fantastic that you write about what you know and enjoy. its a brilliant idea to write about racing because you can really put in a lot of imagery, plus, it's a really original idea so it won't be boring cookie-cutter crap. it seems to be something you could write a lot about, so i say just start writing and don't stop until there's something on your paper you like.
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